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loveanddarkness ([identity profile] loveanddarkness.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] sab 2005-11-20 02:48 pm (UTC)

I can see this.

If it doesn't fit in with what you're writing, that's one thing, but that doesn't mean it's bad or couldn't be explored on its own, in another story, or explored in another way in this story.

The hand on the heart is way good. Also the girls in the science library carrels.

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