ext_12968 ([identity profile] roz-mcclure.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] sab 2008-06-06 10:35 am (UTC)

"Ding, dong, bell," says Oliver, from the doorway, as Rufus crumples to the floor.

Ellen kneels immediately, checking Rufus's face for bruises. "He's fine," she says. "You guys, he's fine."

"Thank god," says Oliver.

"Damn," says Geoffrey.

"Fuck off," says Rufus.


This as especially fabulous. You've genuinely captured both the voices of the characters and the beats of the show. And kept them up all through the scorchingly hot sex scenes! Well done.

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