This was great! I usually find shifting perspective in a sex scene really annoying, but it worked really well in this one. Kudos for pulling that off! Elsewhere, I enjoyed the shifting POV and the way Atlantis's view on things pulled everything together. I loved the way you brought the mental and the physical together in this. It was as though the two were constantly striving for dominance in both their minds. There were lots and lots of little things I liked, but for some reason John's reasoning that his intuitive grasp of the right answer to the final problem was 'cheating' really struck me the most. It says so much about the way he thinks - so very different from Rodney.
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Date: 2005-11-27 04:04 am (UTC)Thanks. I really enjoyed this.